"I was lying face-down on the damp sand, tipping between consciousness, seagulls cawed mockingly at me."
"The colossal eye engulfs me, luring me into a world of my own, before the luminescence traps me, blocking reality."
"A fearful storm ensued later that evening, waves advanced, fear and worry filled the air."
"A rock tumbled. I gasped, turning to see a bedraggled sailor looking at me."
My story is the turtle photo it starts like, in the deep blue sea there is a hidden world that people don't know about.
ReplyDeleteYay mission accomplished (impressed miss Saxon ) I'm so happy that one of my sentence is on the blog it is the red one have a read.
ReplyDeleteWow such amazing sentences and great vocabulary
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to do some more writing tomorrow!!🙂
ReplyDeleteFantastic writing, well done!
ReplyDeleteMy story is on the turtle picture also and describes a land where no one has been before.
ReplyDeleteI can't believe we're this fabulous already last year it took a while for the amazinness to kick in
ReplyDeleteThe floatsom writing was about the most fun piece of writing I have ever done.My favorite part of writing this story was gitting to chose which picture I wanted to write about.I choose the one with the octopus in the arm chair.
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